Build How Big Chance Of Approval To Te Build Crew Do I Have?

Recently I posted a Tread In which I wanted you to tell me how to improve my builds: https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/how-to-make-my-builds-better-build-crew-please-help.200972/
I listenned to some of your tips and tried to make something better, but before I will send the appication I wanna know your Opinion about this build, How to mabye improve it and If it yould be good enough for getting to the build crew
This build is made in the amplified terrain.
I know I need more builds to get to the build crew, but I want your opinion for this specific one
BTW here are few other builds: http://rlll93.imgur.com/all/

 

I would recommend making your own terrain :)
Anyway, you need a lot more than 1 build to get in.
This one is good, but you need to show that you're versatile.

 

please

please read the last two lines :D

 

No offense, but those really aren't that good. I did read them, I'm not blind, and honestly, your best bet is to just scrap those few and make new ones. This is just my opinion, I don't mean any offense.

 

And I agree with you

 

This build is a big improvement from your last post and fits wynncrafts style more, I would recommend learning at least the basics of voxelsniper though

 

I know the basics, I just don't have where to use it, I had once, but the server is now dead

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Well, It's because this is the first build I did for the purpose of getting to the BC

 

If you can make more of the same quality as the one for this forum post, then you might get in

 

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But aternos starts for 30 minutes

 

Nice work man! Keep it up