Build How To Make My Builds Better? (build Crew, Please Help)

I'd like to get to the build crew, but you keep rejecting me, I'd like to know why and what to improve.

go here to see more Images of my builds http://rlll93.imgur.com/all/
and here to see videos in which I build them

 

try using multiple types of wood/stone/clay
right now it looks kinda bland

 

maybe you should improve the terrain a bit with stalagmites/ctites, bushes, etc.
but honestly it looks pretty fucking

 

which one?

 

The first, fourth and sixth

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The first, fourth and sixth

 

don't use pocket edition builds in your apps.

Your terrain is very straight, flat and unnatural. Give it some curves !!

Don't spam. The sea lanterns, the waterfalls, it's too much. Also try to use hidden lighting; glowstone and sea lanterns have really garish textures.

 

thank you

 

i feel like i saw something like this before...
oh yeah the abandoned mines map in a minigame that died in favor to a bland simple and bad worked minigame

i like it
yet you could try making cliffs less flat/earthquake god destroying everything with stone platforms-like

 

remove the lights on the ground, and don't spam lights on buildings. I think its a cave, so it should be dark. Maybe put some layers of glass on the floor, so it looks a bit cooler.
Im not a pro, but this is what I think

 

Many people say, that I should improve the terrain (like in the cave, where I have flat walls, add something natural (like custom trees, vines and other stuff.). They also tell me that some of the pallet isn't matching (like in the first picture, with prismarine and nether wart blocks. Also with the spam of sea lanterns)
I provided you with some screenshots and a link: http://rlll93.imgur.com/all/ that noone used, with more pictures from more angles.
The 4th picture was in a plot server Grian.com
This is another picture you could've found there, but it's my mistake, I should've counted on not many people going to unknown links. And it is made of wood, even no trees are around because the building isn't finished (I know I shouldn't post anything unfinished, but...)
Another build I am doing right now will have the story and the "feel", I'll send a link, when I'm done.
So thank you for your advices.

 

Your builds are amazing, first of all. ;)
Second, you probably do need to add more types of wood. In all your builds. Try gradients.
Third, as an avid Minecraft ship builder, I think your ship may need to be widened at the middle. It looks a bit unnatural.
Fourth, not all applications are denied because of the building. Perhaps you need to improve your words or spellcheck? Or maybe you need to get better at WorldEdit and VoxelSniper. Either way, keep trying!

 

Don't focus on spelling, word choice or correct grammar, it's all about your builds and attitude. Plenty of people are still learning English, and they get along great.

 

if you are a guy who spends their entire time in the internet learning english shall not be a problem
just like me, in my class nobody knows what you would be saying rn and here i am understanding everything u guys say :p

 

For your first build, don't use sea lanterns. Use lava, and hidden lighting, eg. sea lanturn behind cobblestone wall or carpet.
For your second the tower... I have really nothing to say.
For the third... Oh Fu** you built that in Pocket?...? Wow... But the build in general is too geometrical.
Fourth, build in good background is bad.
Second to last, do the interior.
The final build... make the paths out of bright colour I will be more colourfull :D

 

Thx for reply
For the first build many people say here not to use sea lanterns, and I agree, but when I've done it in WorldPainter I thought It would be a good idea.
For the third, yes pocket edition, what I've built when I was bored
Fourth, It's built on plot server
Second to last, the Interior there Is, look at first half a minute of this video
The Final, I think it is good to have it the way it is, but I will consider

 

This video makes me dizzy