Build Viking Lounge/ship

feedback appriciated











attic

 

A few things

• Windows on viking lodges don't fit, just use indoor torches/lighting
• Roof ...twirls I would reserve for fantasy houses and magic places :P
• bigger mast and sail on the boat
• Keep building cool stuff

 

Hey, thanks for the feedback. I really appticiate it.

• How would a house without windows look? I've never seen one before
• Twirls, do you mean the ends of the roof on both sides?
• I really need a video on sails if you can link one, im really bad at those
• Will do

 

A house without windows is just that. Remove the windows. Yes, I meant the ends of the roof. HERE is a video I found that might help.

 

Thanks, I'm working on my first big sized ship right now

 

Adding carpet might help for the enterior. The roof curls seem unessecary for this build.
If you want maybe you can add a pattern to the floor of the dock, make it look cooler.

Other than that it's a decent build. Keep it up.

 

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind

Other than that global note: my next build should be coming soon

 

The detailing is pretty good, but try to add some more variation in the stone. Also you could assist a cobble trims as foundation. on top of that I think the roof looks a bit weird, maybe try giving it a bit more hight, and maybe another wood along the top, I'm not sure, just experiment. The ship is decent but as previously said, the sail needs work. Also I don't like the bridge over to it, I think it would be better with a smaller gap, and try to be inventive with ways to tie the ship to the dock. All in all a decent build, keep up the good work,

 

Wow what texture pack did you use?

 

SEUS Shaders and Dynamic Skies

http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...dramatic-skys-a-real-hd-sky-updated-to-1-11-2
http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...c-ethers-unbelievable-shaders-compatible-with

 

thanks