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Build City Walls W/ Clock Town Thing [still W.i.p] Please Rate

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by tokyo559, May 15, 2017.

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How is the build so far?

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  1. tokyo559

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    Enduh Uh, is it the End? HERO

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    Looks great! I love the Aldorei feeling. Great depth and balance of detail. I don't see much wrong with it besides maybe adding slabs or stairs to the roof frame to make it smoother and more prominent. Add a poll!
     
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    Lumia Making your potatoes since 2002. CT Manager HERO Builder

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    Looks cool. One thing I could suggest is adding a noticeable base to put a visible barrier between the terrain and the building. In my experience it makes buildings look cooler but that could just be me.
     
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    Vaward First 100% Discoveries as of 12/19/17 22:42 CHAMPION

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    I agree with Bob
     
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    I agree it looks more clean and stuff, Will do!
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    Thanks dude! and Will do!
     
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    Reefive Do you hate the assassin? VIP+

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    Good build!
    The clock... Is soooo good!!!!
    THE ONE THING THAT REALLY BOTHERS ME; the fences on the left & right sides of the clock tower thingy, the windows are made out of fences... and it just does not look right. :P
     
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    Yuno F Gasai Forum God, FW

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    das ist pretty
     
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    In larger builds the windows are made out of fences sometimes, I feel like glass would look too modern
     
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    Using dark glass helps or breaking up the colours in the fences, example: randomly putting spruce in the birch fences here and there :)
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    Dark I mean Black or Gray
     
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    Ok, Il try it
     
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    bumping... <3
     
  12. Grantdrew

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    Looks really cool!
     
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    Thanks bro! :D
     
  14. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    Yeah, definitely add some slabs or stairs to the roof frame, it will make it look much more pleasing.
    Other than that, I love it!
    I really like your choice of roof colors - the stone brick is a really creative use of it's blending/contrast with the clay.
     
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    Thanks dude! And Il work on that roof, Il be posting an update shortly!
     
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    WOw this is really cool you should be on the build team you seem to be very good at this.
     
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    Thanks bro! I will try to join the build team
     
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    I love pretty much everything about this build
    The only thing is that the color palette of the terrain looks kinda weird and unreal imho
     
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    I see what you mean, however once I add trees and stuff the attention from the ground will be redirected to all the trees and mushrooms I will add, I appreciate your support however! :D <3
     
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