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Build Big Elvern House [i Need Ratings]

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by tokyo559, May 2, 2017.

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Rating

  1. 10/10 [Perfect]

    2 vote(s)
    10.0%
  2. 8/10 [Pretty good, could use some improvements]

    7 vote(s)
    35.0%
  3. 6/10 [Needs work, but good start]

    9 vote(s)
    45.0%
  4. 4/10 [Satisfying....]

    1 vote(s)
    5.0%
  5. 2/10 [Very insignificant]

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  6. 0/10 [Destroy it and rebuild]

    1 vote(s)
    5.0%
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  1. tokyo559

    tokyo559 キリトTOKYOキリト

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    Please give me any tips that I can use to improve any aspect of this build.

    And 2: (Will it fit into this atmosphere nicely?)
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  2. didvk

    didvk The Onion VIP

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    Try to make the roof more curvy, and try to avoid straight diagonal lines.
     
  3. tokyo559

    tokyo559 キリトTOKYOキリト

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    Ok
     
  4. Ahpi

    Ahpi somy guy

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    With an elven house, you really don't want the walls to go straight down without anything to add to it-it looks awkward.
     
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  5. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    The solid birch walls could use a little more detail, as well as the fact that your roof's edge is straight-straight-straight-straight-HUGE CURVE
    you could use some for bendiness in the roof :p
     
  6. tokyo559

    tokyo559 キリトTOKYOキリト

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    Thanks for the tips! Il get right to improvement
     
  7. MysticAdventurer

    MysticAdventurer Purple! CHAMPION

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    The only shape is the roof, plus the walls are to plain. detail the walls and/or add more shape to the building
     
  8. Yuno F Gasai

    Yuno F Gasai Forum God, FW

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    try to make the roof stick out more
     
  9. Sputnik

    Sputnik Seriously Unserious VIP+

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    If you're making a house that large, I suggest you to add more shape to it to make it stand out. Also, the low amount of block variation makes it abit boring to look at, so I suggest you to get more variation trough the entire build to make it eyecatching. Also, since there is elves we're talking about here, it might be a good idea to make it blend in with nature.

    Other than that, I see much potential with your build. Looking forward for the improvised result! :)
     
  10. Aya

    Aya Very Serious Gensokyo Journalist HERO

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    0/10 not elvern enough
     
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