Feedback (not Clickbait)

Let's start by saying I NEED THES FEEDBAKS!! jk.

(real) Hi, DoctorFam stupid name... I would like to apply on the CT. Yet, I gotten 7/8 denied and one promising.
The CT says I should approve but like the stupid mindless jer-- But I've got no ideas of approvment so I need
YOU TO HELP MEH!!

• First be harsh but don't be a JERK
• This Is A Prototype So The Cliff are not blocked nor smoothed
• Feedback like (Size,Nature and Structures) I already got IDEAS for terrain

1. If CT reads this: What do you look in a Builder socially. (In my app i said all about me)
2. Is there a way to read my old apps?

Without Further A Do Man that sounded wierd? Here Are M Pictures (Prepare For Anti Climactic Builds)

http://i.imgur.com/OsFGc7H.png
http://i.imgur.com/iGTHTbx.png
http://i.imgur.com/EiVFhaS.png
http://i.imgur.com/QnmDaPf.png
http://imgur.com/khrwNtT
http://i.imgur.com/QnmDaPf.png

Yes I know the They suck. The grass is messed up the water doesn't look natrual
Anyways Thanks for Reading.

 

I'd highly suggest a full and completed product before asking for feedback - it shows more effort. Also, I haven't been here long but I know from experience that a top-tier group would want the upmost maturity that you can offer. This isn't me being a jerk - you said to be harsh, so here it comes: This post looks incredibly immature, at least from my standpoint, and I'm not even on the team you're interested in. Random capital letters, immature "side comments", putting yourself down constantly throughout the thread, asking what to put into an application... also, improve* not approve. I see a lot of spelling and grammar errors here, which need to definitely be fixed on an application. You've been on the forums since January - slow down with applications, give more thought in it, take time off to mature more, and remember: it's not the end of the world. In Message me for further questions.

 

First off, it is just really lacking detail.
I'd recommend using 6 sided log (if you have access to world edit) for the trees.
In the second picture, the cave ceiling is a bit low and doesn't smoothly transition to the cave floor. It also needs block variation: cobblestone, andesite, clay, etc.
In the third image, you can easily see it's a flat world and then *suddenly hill*, and also the trees need to be 6 sided like mentioned above.
For the fourth one, river shape is okay, it just needs more depth.
The fifth one, again, you can easily tell its a flat world.
(Sixth: you accidentally linked the fourth one again, stuff like this, organization, the CT pays attention to.)

Overall, you're trees and buildings are pretty good. You mainly need practice in voxel sniper if you want to be a terrainer, and for the overall they're lacking detail: leaves, bushes, flowers, rocks, extra buildings.

Practice, practice, practice! And good luck on making the team!

 

Thanks For The Feedback :)

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Thanks

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CT members gave me advice for my builds but hearing by non-Ct member help more :)

 

Whelp I don't have anything to say

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Anywho,
I recommend adding more elevation (hills and mountains) to the build, so far it seems very flat and pretty bland. If you were going for a swampy feel to your build, add more block variation (dirt, podzol, coarse dirt, etc) to make it a bit more interesting. Add vegetation like vines and plants, and for a swampy feel add more small ponds and make the trees more dense. Don't let it end up like 90% of Corkus!

So far, just add more detail to your terrain.

 

Concerning the terrain. I already have plans for it. Thanks anyways the vegetation I haven't thought of :D

 

I got a tip :]
Use voxel (sniper, terraforming tool) to make your world feel less "flat", Your build feels really flat at corner-ended (corner-ended: everything is very sharp, ex: (see A))
You also need to change the biome, because the worn-out & dead, feel ALWAYS goes with dark ground (marsh?).
Idea of my tip: make it feel less flat :]
Well, in all your little houses and what not are good! Keep on going!!!!

A:
[] <----The corner
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vvvvvvvv Look at my build!!! You will see my idea of what "flat" is!

 

I do not have access to Voxel but Thanks for the Feedback

 

Just read the LONG text below to make it happen :)
If the below does not work, just console me :)

Spoiler: How to get a VoxelSniper server for 1.11.2

Here's a link to get a craftbukkit server: https://getbukkit.org/craftbukkit
1) get the .jar file and place it into any file (with no files in it)
2) create a file called run.bat, inside place this text (you can just type this into the command prompt.):
java -Xmx1024M -jar craftbukkit-1.11.2.jar -o true
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Replace with the files name
3) double click run.bat and it should open, then close.
4) find the 'eula' in your file folder that you have the craftbukkit inside. Switch the eula to 'true'
5) double click run.bat and your server making is finished!
5.5) MAKE SURE TO OP YOURSELF
5.7) To join go to your multiplayer screen and type in 'localhost' in the quick-connect
6) Play around with server.properties (not going into detail)
7) Go to https://dev.bukkit.org/projects/voxelsniper and https://dev.bukkit.org/projects/totalpermissions
7.5) BTW you can also get WorldEdit, to make it easier
8) *Your server must be closed to do this step* Download the .jar file and place it into the 'plugins' folder
9) Run your server again, basically that's it.
10) *EXTRA* to close the server type 'stop' into the server, to OP yourself type 'op [your username]' and whitelist the server for safety
10.5) Whitelist commands: 'whitelist on', 'whitelist (add?) [your username]'
--->GRIAN's<--- tutorial on voxelsniper :)
I hope this helps :)

 

Or just join in grian.net and get great access t voxel+world edit...

 

I feel bad for you

 

what do you mean?