[rp] World Of Anarchy [cancelled]

Constantine
The Legion of Steel did make it back.

A. Free Action

 

"Hello I have come to take your money." and hold out my hand

 

Bailwolf
Combat has started?
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Bailwolf: 100/100 [ST: 100/100]

Fast Looter: 100/100
Average Looter: 100/100
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A. Free Action

 

uhh use fireball XD

 

Bailwolf
You missed the fireball.
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The two looters backed off.

A. Free Action

 

Go into no mans land for loot

 

Bailwolf
You walked into No Man's Land.

A. Free Action

 

Constantine decides to sleep.

 

(This RP is going REALLY slow)
Constantine
You sleep and restored all of your ST.

A. Free Action

 

(It was only going fast before cause I was in it xD I just can't think of an original character to join back in with)

 

(Well, a RP has to have multiple people advancing the story instead of one person)

 

(Ya. In Moon's Dragon we also had Retifile who was also active a lot. But I'm pretty sure I was the most active out of everyone, making it seem like it was going fast cause I constantly replied)

 

Constantine goes outside to check for a new mission.

 

(In that case, I will judge your new rp)

Flaws:

1. Don't use XD or phrases like lol in the main post. It will seem like you're immature and definitely don't know what you're doing.
2. Remain on topic, your first paragraph strays a bit
3. Don't use the words too often: Stuff, things, something, etc
4. Don't use slang like gatta as a GM.
5. Make it different from other RPs. I see too much similarity with my RPs

Constantine
You wake up and saw a kid going through your inventory.

A. Free Action

 

(Alright, I'll try to edit it to make it seem better then)

 

Constantine draws his sword and threatens to kill the kid.

 

Constantine
The kid ran with your rations.

A. Free Action

 

Constantine runs after the kid, yellin, "You're a fucking dead man!"

 

Constantine
He's a dead boy, not a man.
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Benny Hill theme ensures.

A. Free Action

 

Constantine uses Release Void on the fool.