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Build Mountain Build (60% Done)

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Siri, Oct 19, 2016.

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Do you like this?

  1. Yes. explain why you like it

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  2. No, but I think doing (fill in the blank) will help it

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  1. Siri

    Siri Always here to help CHAMPION

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    Hello!
    so a few months back I started a building project on a creative server, I forgot about it and came back to it about a week ago. And I would like to share it with you guys so you could give me feedback :>
    anyways, here are some pictures.

    Here is the 'house mountain' thing, it is the first mountain I have made and is the one I am the least proud of.
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    The trees are supposed to represent some unfinished lore for this place, the house is supposed to be kind of steampunk-ish, but that did not work out very well.

    This is the 2nd island I have built and is, pretty cool?
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    the tower is supposed to represent the old people that have lived in those mountains before the 'steampunk move' came in

    This is the biggest island and will contain the most lore out of all the others, the people in that town have lived peacefully until the 'steampunk' move took place.
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    unfinished

    Here is some of the lore that those islands have, up until the year 391 the citizens of Ahliwoo lived peacefully in their small, green town town, with a large tower that has a prison under it.
    One day, a few people have moved to 'Lagora' island. Where they have settled there.
    What none of the citizens knew, is that is Lagora island lived a scientist who had invented machines of all kinds.
    Although one day, he had made a machine that would create what he called, the 'Project green"
    After a few years on working on the machine, he heard a voice in his head telling him to change his machine so that the person could escape the prison, the scientist got pretty scared and has done what the voice told him to do, he had launched the machine, but after a few minutes. all the plants died and got replaced with weird clock like rings, a large tree had grown from the prison and the prisoner that was stuck in there for many years escaped.

    Anyways, thanks for (hopefully) looking and reading my post, and I hope that you guys would give me feedback so I could improve on myself!
     
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  2. FunnyMonkeyBoy

    FunnyMonkeyBoy Crazed adventurer

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    Add more details, make it look more natural..
     
  3. Micm

    Micm Wynncraft Enthusiast

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    I think it looks great. Trees could see more attention in my opinion, but overall it looks great!
     
  4. elmo

    elmo Im confused

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    Looking pretty nice!
     
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  5. SPYROHAWK

    SPYROHAWK Head Grand Theorist HERO

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    eeeeew plot server...
     
  6. Toasted Asian

    Toasted Asian Toasty VIP+

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    The roof in house 1....jesus


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    Too much detail takes away depth

    ..
     
  7. Zitrine

    Zitrine In my napalm era CHAMPION

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    eeeew spyrohawk...
     
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  8. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    I dont know but the texture pack you have makes the ground look rather unpleasant, even for the lore it just doesnt fit.
    The mountain and waterfall looks beautiful, yet you added rather miserable blocks into the bunch, but it looks fine.

    If you have a floating island to make, do it, than the steampunk feel would make this build better.
     
  9. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Could I have the link to the Texturepack? I never got around to downloading it =P
     
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  10. Siri

    Siri Always here to help CHAMPION

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    Will add that, thank you for your opinion!
    Thanks!
    was planning on adding one, thanks for your opinion! :saltedhappy:
    http://www.mediafire.com/file/9g96c2vh9di9ygq/Wynncraft.zip
     
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  11. Dijkkla

    Dijkkla Well-Known Adventurer VIP+

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    What resource pack are you using? It really looks like the WynnCraft pack
     
  12. Euxis

    Euxis Well-Known Adventurer VIP

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    It is the wynncraft texture pack
     
  13. Dijkkla

    Dijkkla Well-Known Adventurer VIP+

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    How did you get it? Were you part of the Content Team at some point?
    (Or if its allowed provide a download link?)
     
  14. Euxis

    Euxis Well-Known Adventurer VIP

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    I don't know if its illegal or not but...

    [/go to your start menu and type %appdata%, and then you go to .minecraft, scroll down until you find server-resource-packs, and then find legacy_wynnpack_updated, and then you need 7Zip, a free archive thingy. You use 7Zip to open the file and drag the content on your desktop.]
     
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