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Lore/Story Angels And Demons: A Legends Story (hub) Wynncraft Novel

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Amun_Ra, Nov 5, 2016.

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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Also added two more characters to the character list!
     
    Amun_Ra, Dec 15, 2016
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Amun_Ra, Dec 28, 2016
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    Nihilego36 Avos Air Avos

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    Hey! Why is I, Salomnis, the corruption who rebelled against corruption, not in the story?
     
    Nihilego36, Jan 1, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Hehehe.... because Salomnis was one year old then. :D
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 7, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Bump, Chapter 15 is out! Sorry for the wait!
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 8, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Amun_Ra, Jan 10, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    I think you went overboard with the colors. Just one or two, like red and purple would suffice. If this story is about heroes, mutants, and defeating evil, I don't think rainbow is the proper way to illustrate that. Also, major spoiler in the synopsis.
    So, because of this, we now know that he will become a legend after Bob without reading the story. Unless this is intentional, I'd refrain from spoiling the future of your main character (I can delete this part of the post if you decide to change this in the synopsis).
    Not dark theme friendly.

    About the new character list; although it is highly improved from just a list of names (at least I think that's what it used to be), it's better if you put each character in their own spoiler within the list spoiler, so that no scrolling is needed to see the information of each. Also, adding their gender may be a good addition.

    The title art works. I just wish there wasn't so much unused space at the bottom left.
     
    Reyko, Jan 10, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Thanks for the great advise. Me stating about Nicolas becoming a Wynnic Legend is intentional, btw.
    I'll change them in a few minutes.
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 11, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Synopsis for Legends I is added. Legends II Synopsis is going to be added soon. It is recommended that you read it.
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 11, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Amun_Ra, Jan 14, 2017
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    Chapter 18 is out! First chapter to be in POV of Ken.
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 15, 2017
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    Bump... Will start writing soon
     
    Amun_Ra, Jan 19, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Amun_Ra, Jan 21, 2017
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    Amun_Ra 『One Who Steals the Principle of Fire』

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    Bump, chapter 20 is out!

    Ha, I got to chapter 20!

    >:D

    Sorry xD
     
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    _lord_hades The Cocky Fighter VIP+

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    So many chapters now. XD
     
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