Art Finished Oc Lineart, Color Critique, And Title Designer Help

Hey so yesterday I posted a pic of a bunch of OCs together.

So today I finished the sketch and I chose some sample colors and in the comments, can you guys say if you like the sample colors and they fit the character?

Also I need someone to design the title for me as the one I made looks pretty crappy. The person who does make the title into something I like will get a group shot picture made for them if they want it.

Spoiler: Line Art

Spoiler: Sample Colored Line Art

 

yeah it's spelled "labyrinth" so unless the title is meant to be that way, you've got a little work to redo

 

Oh shit im stupid. Kill me. Please.

I need to fix that, or the guy who does titles can do that.
Who was the guy that did modern's title for 'The Narrative'?

 

I'm pretty sure it was @Kuroi.

 

Woah, people actually know about me??
That's awesome

What do you want me to write you?

 

'The Labyrinth'
Do it in a more similar manner to modern's 'The Narrative' but shorter so it can fit that space.

Maybe you can make it looks cool so it looks like some sorta logo thing? (Look at Boku no Hero Academia's logo)
That is, if you are comfortable with that sorta thing.

Want a picture?

 

Yes or no? I'm getting anxious >_<

 

What yeah definitely I'm absolutely going to do it, it's just that I'm lazy and I probably won't get to it for a few days.

 

Kay, you want me to draw a picture for you or something in return? If you do, private message me with the details.

 

How's this?
You don't have to make me anything in return, I'd just be happy if you give me credit if you ever end up using it.

 

Holy shit your a god. Thanks. I have a feeling of obligation tho, so if you ever want something like an art piece, just ask.

Also, do you happen to have a higher resolution? This one is a bit blurry when enlarged to fit my picture.

 

How about this
only six days late, too