Build 2 Towns And A Tunnel (?)

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yea... they are a little bit older now but why not post them ?:P

 

Pls get optifine the glass edges hurt me

 

But isnt that what gives minecraft the minecraft feeling ? edges ?:P

Anyways,Ill consider it. Post a screenie of how they look with optifine,please D:

 

Thought you quit wynn but I check your stats sometimes and your on like daily xD

 

Yea but I am mainly on for my daily crates and my daily chests and that only when I have nothing to do on the other games I play :P
But don't worry,once they increase cap to 150 ill be playin again

 

The mineshaft looks amazing! Maybe tone down a bit with the cobblestone on the roof houses. Less thick may look better. Also do include some more stone supports to the bottom of the houses to try and give it some strength to its base =) it's up to you though!

 

In Grians stream he said it was most likely staying at 100. He also said that it might change.

 

Checked and yea,I agree,the cobblestone was a little too much for that bright color style. As I said, this is like 3 months old now and my first serious build :D

Thanks for the critism tho, i'll try to get better

 

I'm not very impressed although it is above average. The tent bottoms need much more detail and they shouldn't look perfect. The roofs on the houses look weird and are very repetitive. The paths look wierd with the bits of granite and the paths don't look very random they look very unnatural. The terrain is very flat and could use some hillage. The river needs fixing up with the little random bits and could use some detail such as sand, lily pads, and sugar cane. Also a good way to make the houses look aged as it seems to be what u tried to do don't place so many vines and try using stairs to create indents. Lastly make the bases of the trees larger so it is a bit more natural.

 

One word - noice

 

First town could is good for first build, but could use a lot of work, mainly on house design and trees. Second town looks nice, maybe add some trees and terrain some more, if not populate that empty space. Mineshaft looks nice, maybe give it a bit of character (add something unique!)

Overall these are really good though! Especially considering they are your earliest builds!