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Build Something I've Been Working On For A While

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Mr_Philly, Nov 27, 2016.

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How good is it? Be honest

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  1. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    Hello!
    Thanks for visiting my thread!
    I've been working on this build for maybe two weeks now,
    and would like some reviewing. (constructive pls)

    Pictures and Stuff (With Shaders)
    Pictures and Stuff (Without)

    Shaders used are Sildur's Shader High
    So yeah, what do you think? :D​
     
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  2. Happy New Year

    Happy New Year Please bring the shoutbox back VIP+

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    looks really good, gj!
     
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  3. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    holy crap that was fast
    thanks :D
     
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  4. Vanward

    Vanward All Around Creepy Guy; Cringy Comedian

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    Awesome! I like the overall design of the terrain, and the shaders give it extraordinary detail!
    Keep up the work and (if you want to :P) so you can definitely get in the build team! :D
     
  5. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    Wow these are looking really good!
     
  6. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Could you also upload some non-shaders? =p I'd love to see it in a less distracting way lol
     
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    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    I personally would like to see it without the shaders, so I can see the raw detail. ^-^
     
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  8. Theeef

    Theeef Owner of The Crossroads CHAMPION

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    No shaders please. It looks good but with the sharers I honestly can't tell.
     
  9. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    Should of thought of that lol. Here ya go: http://imgur.com/a/WjzNa
     
  10. Zitrine

    Zitrine Lore-kun CHAMPION

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    It's cool! The only thing that irritates me is the combination of these paths:

    2016-11-28_21.59.12.png

    Idk about all the others but I personally do not like that design on paths.
    A great build nonetheless!
     
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  11. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    Its very good but just from the atmosphere of the build and how everything looks the towers should look a bit weathered with indents and different wood colors. Other than that I'd suggest doing a Wynncraft build application at some point.
     
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    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    I absolutely agree with Rujala on the paths part, but one more thing that could look cool is trying to use different types of wood on the towers. Too much spruce kind of dwarfs the colors in the tower. Adding more shades of brown could allow you to keep the amount of wall color to spruce wood and have interesting designs!
    The terrain is nice, but it might add more to the atmosphere if you extend the land out and make it look like a forest on top of the cliff instead of a few spaced trees. Maybe you could even add vines falling down the cliff and small patches of cliff a bit lower.
    For the bridge, I might not be able to see it, but just make sure there are supports down there. You might find it adds to the bridge a lot!

    Really nice build in all! The trees themselves are nice and charming, and the waterfall looks lovely. I can't wait to see what you come up with next =D
    Till then :)
     
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    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    I like it more without the shaders. xP You don't need those silly lil things. :P
    Regardless I think it would look great if there were more smaller buildings/houses to match the towers. :D When I think towers, I think that there's a lookout post and surely has a settlement to match it. :) The tents are lovely, but it looks like a temporary encampment in contrast to a permanent one. That's me though, and I'm weird. ;P xD
    Keep it up!
     
  14. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    I'm new at paths, and random block placement - thanks for the tip lol.
    http://prntscr.com/ddgrpr
    How does a bit of podzul look in it?

    Hi, how do these look?
    http://prntscr.com/ddgs6n
    I'll keep trying if they're not sufficient c:

    Also, there are most definitely support beams c:
    http://prntscr.com/ddgsnl

    Thanks for the review!

    Thanks for the review!
    I'm new at building this style, and I was originally thinking of a town below the towers, with an ocean on the side where the other wall is, but I have absolutely NO IDEA how to build wide structures in the very tall style. Any thoughts?
    Also, yeah, I definitely see where you're going with that. c:
     
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  15. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    You're starting to get the idea! =)
    Maybe instead of having them in small pieces of dark oak, you can try to replace the spruce chunk of wood with dark oak and repeat it around. A few chunks at the base and around the top might look nice. If you don't get what I'm saying, let me know because I can be confusing sometimes xP
     
  16. Zitrine

    Zitrine Lore-kun CHAMPION

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    Much better!
     
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  17. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    wat

    how's this? http://prntscr.com/dduzcl
    (One on far left)
     
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    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Scriptuz Well-Known Adventurer

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    It's really good c:
     
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  20. CompleteCircuit

    CompleteCircuit Well-Known Adventurer

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    Love the trees.
     
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