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Build Random Tower Build

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Soulesspancake, Nov 18, 2016.

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  1. Soulesspancake

    Soulesspancake Well-Known Adventurer VIP+

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    I Decided to build a Tower with some other things around it. Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated. 2016-11-18_13.46.48.png 2016-11-18_13.46.54.png 2016-11-18_13.47.02.png 2016-11-18_13.47.39.png 2016-11-18_13.46.44.png
     
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    Theeef Self Proclaimed Idiot CHAMPION

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    A bit plain, doesn't have a lot or intersting contrasts and the colors are boring.
     
  3. Soulesspancake

    Soulesspancake Well-Known Adventurer VIP+

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    Alright Ty for the Advice.
     
  4. PearlescentMoon

    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    Try to avoid using too much stone-based blocks on the tower. In its current state, it merges into the terrain, rather than showing a contrast between the two.
    Don't be afraid to give the tower a bit of colour with stained clay (or any coloured block ofc), and henceforth detailing so that shines through. What you have now seems crowded and overdetailed with stone, which could be minimised.
    When making terrain, avoid grass blocks stacked on top of each other; they don't look natural.
    That's all I wish to say about that currently, as I don't want to overflood anything with all my personality nits and picks. :P It's a lovely start, and those are my critiques if you choose to use them or not.^-^
     
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    Soulesspancake Well-Known Adventurer VIP+

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    thanks for the Tips I'll keep them in mind when making more builds.
     
  6. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Your graphics makes the build look very ugly.
    I aint the best person for criticism, but I can very well try.

    The stone and grey blocks makes the build look a pit plain, wood is a good option but it looks a bit ugly, suggest adding a tree or some flowers of some sort, it will just make the build contrast better.

    And your hill budged together with the path does not look as natural, play around and I guarantee you will make the build better!
     
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    RicochetfromtheD 赵二

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    First thing: Turn down the gamma
     
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