Build A Small Cliff Island Thing

Hey guys! i've seen alot of great builds in this section so i wanted to post my own. if you guys have any tips or advice for me please reply!

BTW: before you all get triggerd cuz the notch trees, if i build custom trees notch trees would look alot better (and my friend who is able to build custom trees was making a cheese moon so yeah....)

Spoiler: Pictures!

http://imgur.com/a/OH6mD

Im trying to make custom trees atm if anyone has some tips! Please tell me because im having struggles

 

Looks great!
I wouldn't want to stand on that, it looks ready to fall any minute
(Actually, that falling off could be a cool before-after build. You've got your next project right there!)

 

Nice shape! I'd recommend you to try and build some custom trees & terrain on top, adds a lot of atmosphere :3

 

i'll try to make some custom trees thanks for the feedback!

 

the terrain of the cliff itself is a decent start but the grass area needs a bit of shaping it's too thin

 

Thanks for the advice

 

It's a cool concept and I think you've got it down. One thing I'd suggest is that you might want to add some dirt kind of drooping down just so add to that cliff appearance.

 

Thanks for the feedback!
i'll try

 

The stone looks great. If you really want to impress people, try adding a texture to the stone, like using andesite cobblestone ETC.

And just a tip: Have you noticed that grass and dirt goes a few blocks down before reaching stone? Try putting some dirt under the ground so it goes a few blocks down, it will look better if you do it correctly.

 

I did use cobblestone and cyan stained clay in my buid, but thanks for the feedback

 

I dont know anything about a Cheese Moon....
heehehhhehehehe

 

OFCOURSE YOU DONT U STUPID SQUIRELL

luv u

 

Um, this offends me, I mean c'mon where are the sponges?!?!

 

You were there when i was building.... plz u know why i build with sponges!

 

Oh, lol I couldn't see it.

 

It's a start. It isn't good, nor is it bad. You should try to make more realistic trees, use your time to terrain the top a little more, and also give youself the moment to make a house or a village.

I associate your build as an unfinished canvas that you have to paint. Do some more work on it, and this can possibly become great!

Good luck, lad!

 

Thanks! i'll give it a try

 

It's not terrible, but it needs work. A few things I'd change to see a big improvement.

1. Increase the depth of the water (in certain areas)
2. Try and add some custom trees (or different types if you're unfamiliar with making custom trees)
3. A smoother transition from the stone to dirt and grass.

 

It doesn't look very natural at all. The grass doesn't have a very good slope at all. the stone stops quiet suddenly. Also try to mix the dirt and stone to create a better change in layers.

 

Was it built by hand? Cause it looks like it was built by hand without voxel or worldedit