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Build I Made A Floating Island Build And I Want Advice ;)

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by WynncraftNarwhal, Oct 18, 2016.

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  1. Really nice :0

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  1. WynncraftNarwhal

    WynncraftNarwhal Famous Adventurer

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    So, I made a floating island build for a certain server that many of you may know.
    I want advice to make it better because their forums (even though they have like 10x more people) are 10x less active than ours.
    Here it is:

    OVERHEAD:
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    Side view #1:
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    Side view #2:
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  2. FunnyMonkeyBoy

    FunnyMonkeyBoy Crazed adventurer

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    Could be worked on, make it more natural, trees, waterfalls, stuff like that
     
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  3. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Vegetation like bushes, trees, flowers, or grass are lacking quite a bit. One suggestion that might create a better result is to have more than just 1 stone and grass. Have a blend of blocks that compliment each other to make the build look really neat. You can do that with world edit or voxel.
     
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  4. Trvalv

    Trvalv Lament / Gaia

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    Looks great, try adding multiple islands at different height, to give it more depth.
    As the other guy said, add more waterfalls
     
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  5. ElegantDeath

    ElegantDeath Who needs a title anyways HERO

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    looks like Skyward Sword + Mario
     
  6. RicochetfromtheD

    RicochetfromtheD 赵二

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    Can use some work on smoothing the terrain and adding some depth to the bottom.









    Oh, and those holes trigger me.
     
  7. DireFire

    DireFire God of sleep || Was in the 1st swarm since 2014 HERO

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    wat server XD
     
  8. elmo

    elmo Im confused

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    It needs some improvements.....
     
  9. NinjaPro8000

    NinjaPro8000 Famous Adventurer

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    I think what it needs is detail. Maybe a small town some lore and you can have:
     
  10. SPYROHAWK

    SPYROHAWK Head Grand Theorist HERO

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    I like it, but it could just be cuz im a sucker for some good sky-stuff
     
  11. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Shaders makes the build look very plain, try fitting more into the sky if you know what I mean.

    Adding different palettes of blocks on the island, and flowers and stuff will really put this build into shape.
    Not bad for your first island build! (Correct me if it's not your first).
     
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