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Discussion in 'Your Work' started by tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016.

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Is this a Wynncraft level build? If not please leave suggestions!

Poll closed Oct 22, 2016.

  1. Yes

    8 vote(s)
    44.4%

  2. Needs Work

    9 vote(s)
    50.0%

  3. Absolutely Not

    1 vote(s)
    5.6%
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  1. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    Please leave suggestions for this build! 2016-10-01_10.33.01.png 2016-10-01_10.36.54.png 2016-10-01_10.37.02.png 2016-10-01_10.37.06.png
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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    ThomAnn100 I have reached peak intelligence VIP+

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    you should remove the bell
     
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    ok thanks for the suggestion
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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  4. tjmoore04

    tjmoore04 IMMA DO IT VIP+

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    Don't forget to leave suggestions please!
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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  5. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    Seems a little overdetailed and blocky, maybe integrate some of the slabs into the tower, not just placed on the sides. This is just my opinion, you don't need to change a thing if you like that type of look.
     
    Mr_Philly, Oct 1, 2016
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    Thanks for the suggestion Mr_Philly but the problem with integrating slabs is that sometimes it can make the build look weird and unrealistic.
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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  7. Thane

    Thane 360 build scoped

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    Aside from over detailing, I like it. However, there's one more thing I suggest you remove... its the little red and white banner that goes across it, it looks out of place and overall ruins the structure, in my opinion. good build, nonetheless.
     
    Thane, Oct 1, 2016
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  8. tjmoore04

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    ok thanks for the suggestion thane
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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  9. Hexorcism

    Hexorcism warrior class enjoyer CHAMPION

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    The red and white banner that goes around it ruins the structure, like someone said above ^ other than that, it's ok
     
    Hexorcism, Oct 1, 2016
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  10. dan27

    dan27 Travelled Adventurer

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    Too slabspam, try to do less details with only 1 slab or 1 stair and try to use more colors ;)
     
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    dan27 the reason it doesnt got much color is because i dont want it to its suppose to be for a poorer district
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    what EXACTLY do you mean by 1 block or 1 stair
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 1, 2016
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  12. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    It's a nice tower, but you might want to use more than just stonebrick and wood. Maybe the banners can go a bit farther out. Other than that, try using more cobblestone for the base. Try using a different material than stone for the roof
     
    Grantdrew, Oct 2, 2016
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    Baze-Blob Well-Known Adventurer VIP

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    If it's for a poor district how is it brand new? Add different colored wood some vines or cracked stone brick to make it look really poor
     
    Baze-Blob, Oct 2, 2016
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  14. dan27

    dan27 Travelled Adventurer

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    less**
    These kinds of details:
    [​IMG]
     
    dan27, Oct 3, 2016
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    God damnit you beat me to it

    Notes: Use whole blocks or make it thicker
     
    Toasted Asian, Oct 3, 2016
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    MinerDwarf222 I AM A DWARF. HERO

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    dan27 Travelled Adventurer

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    ;)
     
    dan27, Oct 4, 2016
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  18. Imaxelius

    Imaxelius Content Team Manager CT Manager QA Modeler HERO GM Builder

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    I like the colors! Its a bit over detailed, but everyone makes that mistake in the beginning!
     
    Imaxelius, Oct 4, 2016
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    thanks for all the suggestions!
     
    tjmoore04, Oct 5, 2016
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  20. Mr_Philly

    Mr_Philly hi there HERO

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    I said to change the way you use the slabs, not add them...
    You're whole tower is essentially slabs.
    I meant the places shown here:

     
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