Video Minecraft Command Blocks Cutscene : Last Goodbye

Tell me guys what do you think about the cutscene , is it short ? bad ? good ? did i miss something ?
Thanks

Work time : 6 days , 4-3.5 hours daily

 

ColdBump C:

 

This was brutal. Noice command blocking, i dnt even know how to use em. ik this was more focused on the command blocks then the buildings but you couldve at least added a roof ;3

 

I suck at building xD

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BTW I did not make roof just because maybe the room will be darker and less bright

 

Nice command blocks.
And that was little bit cruel xD

 

c:<

 

That's amazing .-. How do you do that

 

Command blocks, its complicated to explain C:
U give armorstand equipments , position , to them , play sound, rotation,clone command I used to cut someone's head off (lol), blood particles etc...
See the little intro I did ? All of those command blocks I used , took a while to make the cutscene C:

 

Ok so here's some advice:

Some People Talking Like This Is Annoying.

When the guillotine falls, it looks like its falling slowly. Fix this by taking out "frames." Since it moves one block at a time, how 'bout making it move 3 blocks at a time? The set is just a copy/paste area with a new set every frame the set moves, right? You don't need to change the people/armor stand set up or anything.

But this is really good. I could never make something like this (let alone put 6 days of work into it)!
noice

 

Actually I put some delay between entities dialogue
I wanted the guillotine to fall slowly a block by a block and here is why :
I tried making to fall fast, it wasn't good at all, I almost could see it , I want players to see that guillotine falling , not flashing downwards .
Making it down by 3 blocks? Yes I don't need to change any thing about armorstand before the head cut off but the guillotine goes down by 3 blocks is really fast
The guillotine I made is meant to be slowed , 1 by 1 fall so players can see the animation.
Lemme ask u a question :P , why armorstand doesn't move quickly and even 2 blocks instead of 0.5 ?
Because this will ruin the animation :(
Actually the guard walking for example are tping 0,5 block every two ticks ( setting repeater on two ticks )and the guillotine falls a blocks every 4 ticks . I wanted to make it as smooth as I can :)

 

It starts buffering right when he's about to get decapitated...

I'll never know how it ends...

 

the reason is cuz I'm shit at animating (actually its pacing.. so yeah).
why is the guard related to the guillotine. it has no interaction at all with the guillotine. are you talking about the reaper (idk what its called... so i'll call it "reaper" cuz that cool, right)? actually its pacing, right? like not pacing (as in walking around aimlessly).. but y'know.. pacing..
and its not my fault you want to see the guillotine - this is not explained, so I made the assumption that you wanted it to go fast, but didn't. that is not actually my fault (but it is not yours either - it's just a misunderstanding)
3 blocks was an example
and the reaper is meant to release the.. rope..? idk what it's called, but the reaper guy is supposed to release the rope, right? well it did lol. so it actually doesn't matter about the armor stands in any way (other than making the guy's head fall off sooner)
how am I supposed to know you tried making it fall fast?
lines 2 and 4 are the same. essentially..
and I don't understand line 5... wait its cuz of minecraft, and your pacing, right? yes that's it. also I don't have any problems with the armor stands.. I don't understand why you think I do
and why does delay between entities' dialogue Make Them Talk Like This? I don't have trouble with how fast/slow the dialogue comes
and how does a guard walking .5 of a block ever 2 ticks and the guillotine falling a block every 4 ticks make it smooth? A guard and a guillotine are not the same (the guard moves 1 block every 4 ticks same as the guillotine right?).

I'm actually getting kinda angry idk why
so lets not talk about this anymore
except at the end is that sound like... an owl or something? idk but its cool
so uh yeah
lets stop talking about this
i'll rage
I don't want to do that
kbai

 

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