Art Qira And Death...

So I approach on drawing Qira and Death I'm not to sure if I did a good job or not. I honestly envisioned Qira to be a beautiful goddess rather than a dull, depressing queen. Whistle Death on the other hand was just pretty normal lol

Drawing: http://a-really-bad-artisit.deviantart.com/art/Qira-and-Death-628575856?ga_submit_new=10%3A1471351950
Once again the forums won't let me post my drawing for some reason -_-

 

I don't think qira wears bright clothing

 

Agreed, but Death is AMAZING.

 

True dat

 

wtf dude u drwaing good naruto fan liek me

 

Doesn't capture Qira very well at all, but Death is neat
(Fyi Qira's skin is pitch black and she wears a grey dress)

 

You should make a picture of a wedding with qira and death. that would give you all the likes

now that I think of it..

o god no

 

i always loved death than qira and with this art more :3

 

Death is great, and Qira is too, but... it's not really Qira. Qira is a black-grey, spider-like monster with white eyes.

 

There is absolutely no spider-like features on Qira IG, she just likes them. A piece of official art also showed Qira as not having any spider features.

 

Well yeah, but her skin color, and the white eyes...... idk, this is just me, but she reminds me of a spider

 

since when did spiders have white eyes
also most spiders are brown

 

God darn it guys, it doesn't have to be an exact replica, the best art is always an interpretation.

 

Thanks for the constructive criticism guys! And yes I do know that qira has a much more darker colour scheme than the one I drew however I did base my ideas on several other pictures such as these two
https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/as-if-qira-wasnt-drawn-enough-times.111847/
http://img00.deviantart.net/ecb7/i/2014/089/3/f/otsutsuki_kaguya_by_s_i_m_c_a-d7bzpzi.png
and yeah i did kinda base my idea on a naruto character^ pls dun't hurt me

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now i've got an idea for my next drawing ;) if i ever do re-draw this lol