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Lore/Story Non-cannon Small Lore

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by tecnojet, Aug 5, 2016.

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What do you think of my story?

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  1. tecnojet

    tecnojet Lazy sheet VIP+

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    This is a Small Non-Cannon story I came up with when I was board! Have fun!

    The Cinfras Ferrets:
    Long ago, when Cinfras was a relatively new city, the Royal Family used to like to wonder around the surrounding areas. They knew the area like the back of their hand! as in, not very well...
    One day, the king was strolling around when he found a small pit, just outside of the city. He, being curious of what it was, approached the hole and saw for a split second; a bandit! The bandit Instantly jumped from the trench and leapt at the king, grabbing his crown and running towards the forest... The Bandit; Whilst running stepped on a ferret and crushed it! The Bandit kept running and as he was almost there, A ferret jumped at him biting his arm! The Bandit fell to the floor writhing and screaming in pain as more and more enraged ferrets ran towards him, one by one the ferrets bit him and immobilised him in agonizing pain! The king was in fast pursuit with a large broadsword, ready to decapitate the horrid thief! The ferrets were latched on, the king reached the scene and the royal guard was tailing them. The king took one mighty swing at the Bandit; as the skin and veins parted the Bandit gave out a horrid Final scream, and as he exhaled blood came pouring out of his mouth. He was dead. The ferrets all scattered away, except one, whom was soon to be the Kings new pet.
    This is why ferrets are looked as important in the Cinfras city. Royal ferrets were bread from the Kings pet and the other ferrets whom killed the Bandit!

    Feel free to leave comments and Constructive criticism, please don't post hate.
     
  2. hmtn

    hmtn Archivist of the Realm

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    Um....
    Well...
    *Is already gone*

    Passable story, 3/5
     
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  3. Wynntastic

    Wynntastic Well-Known Adventurer

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    no cannons? wtf
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  4. Sanae_pls

    Sanae_pls That Fucking Dark Wizard

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    agvara no
     
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