Music Cross The Line

Hey! I'm kind of back, lol.. I have for some reason lost the motivation to do music stuff over the summer, because I know, that when I get back to school that I'll be in all the music stuff. So I figured I should take a break. Plus, I haven't had any inspiration so that's another reason.

I tried something VERY different from what I usually do. This is something that I created using an app called Auxy, and I thought I should show it so I can get some good feedback. I don't know anything about "electronic" music but I tried my best lol.

Anyways, here is "Cross The Line."

Spoiler: Cross The Line

https://soundcloud.com/rexelle2001/cross-the-line-1

Again, some feedback would be nice because I've never tried creating this kind of music. Thank you!

Older Versions

Spoiler: 1st Version

https://soundcloud.com/rexelle2001/cross-the-line/s-LbZpz

 

It's actually quite nice. The beat really has u bobbing your head. :)
However, at 0:09 it goes a little weird for a moment. Also from 0:45-1:20 goes on for too long and the resurgence part really should come sooner

 

I realized that too. I removed the repeated phrases so that it's a little bit shorter. What do you think?

 

I think it's much better! If you want me to point out some very minor things, I suppose I can too

 

That would be great :P

 

Ok, more minor things. This may come across as negative, so please don't think I'm saying your work is that bad.

1. Most of the transitions are very similar. Fade out, hype a little and a bit of a climax return. Try adding different transitions or having the music flow to other parts.
2. You're very good at building up hype for the next bit, but climaxes can seem a little disappointing. If you listen to electronic music they have a definite climax even after small parts

 

Don't worry about it, this is great advice! Thanks for the feedback, I'll definitely take these into consideration :D