Build Small Rustic Tower.

I'd like to show you guys a small tower that I finished making. Please tell me what you think, and any constructive criticism is welcome!

 

Overall, there's some good potential for the tower here, but there's a few things that in my personal opinion I would feel are off.

Your lookout post/roof in comparison to your tower build supporting it looks like a very large to short scale, if that makes sense. I would make it taller so it can fit in proportion to the large roof you have made. (I probably worded that horribly, so I hope it makes sense somewhat)

I also feel like the diorite does not fit with the palette you have chosen, try a different contrasting block that fits with the tones in your other base blocks (grays or browns).

Try and contrast the inner portions of the roof more to give it a bit of character, rather than making it look like a large section of gray that overrides the colour you have implemented elsewhere in the tower.

Of course, this is just all my personal feelings towards it, perfectly up to you if you use it or not. :) Good luck and good work so far. :)

 

Here are the suggestions I have:
1) The diorite looks out of place. Replace it with spruce planks.
2) The acacia log also looks out of place, trash it all.
3) Try framing your roof on the side with spruce stairs, blocks, and slabs.
Other than that, I admire it.

 

Make it taller, and add some more varied overgrowth. One vine is definitely not enough.

 

A Bit too much going on there.

 

As Village said. And it would probably look better if it was taller

 

Both the same things I said...
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Either way... glad I'm not the only one seeing that I spose?