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Build (wip) Floating Island Chain (wip)

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Jacquie, Jul 16, 2016.

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How would you rate this? (Keeping in mind it isn't done yet.)

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  1. Jacquie

    Jacquie Archer is bad change my mind HERO

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    So, I've been working on this by myself for about 2-3 weeks now, and I figured I'd post it here, and try to get some feedback from this community. (Since I know you're all very creative and friendly people!)

    Looking mostly for constructive criticism on this build so far, so please tell me where I could improve!

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    Overview

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    The First Island I Made

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    Second Island, With Broken Bridge

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    Third Island, Complete with Housing, and secret pathway to a forest-y island

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    Behind the House Island

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    Entrance of the Forest-y Island

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    Farther Down the Forest-y Island, Small Pond & Larger Tree

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    Smaller, More Decayed Side-Island

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    Middle Island, Complete With Apple Tree (And an Unstarted Bridge)

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    Final Island, Will Eventually Contain a Small Village, This is the Only Home Currently

    Thanks to @Nivla who has the build server this all is located on!​
     
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  2. Choco

    Choco im broke af give me money thx VIP+

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    Needs more sponge rockets/dicks
     
  3. Jacquie

    Jacquie Archer is bad change my mind HERO

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    Ok but really
     
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  4. whatheckno

    whatheckno cool guy HERO

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  5. Zoingo

    Zoingo The robotic Warrior VIP+

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    Looks great so far! Well done!
     
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  6. AndriX3S

    AndriX3S \\☢☣ Jägermeister ☣☢// VIP

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    You need more sense of humor...
     
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  7. Choco

    Choco im broke af give me money thx VIP+

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    No, not really, it's an inside joke between me & Jake so you I can see why you don't understand it :P
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    Also, yeah, looks great to me, I really give you any constructive criticism since you're a better builder than me xD And also I don't see what's bad/could be improved :P
     
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  8. Mistrise Mystic

    Mistrise Mystic Surfing winds and chasing windfalls HERO

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    Huh. Who'da thunk that Nathan Drake was an excellent builder in Minecraft
     
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  9. Villageacules

    Villageacules Famous Adventurer HERO

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    Really nice! The house could use some work, but other than that, good job.
     
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  10. Procrast

    Procrast Schmoovin' VIP+

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    If there was a submit your own skywars map competition going on at Hypixel & you put this in for it, you'd probably win.
    Not kidding. I have a good feeling about this build.
     
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  11. Frevan

    Frevan Wheres the lamb sauce

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    I think this would be more of a skyblock lobby than a skywars map since it has no clear middle.
    But its cool
     
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  12. Jamieverse

    Jamieverse Legendary Adventurer VIP

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    That's amazing.
     
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