Build Elemental Dungeon

Original Thread: https://forums.wynncraft.com/threads/new-end-gavel-dungeon.137541/
Creator: @EpicZ501
I saw a suggestion based around this idea and it inspired me to make one.
Before you look at the images, please look at the tags. They're a helpful guideline.

Spoiler: Old Shit

Spoiler: Update 1

Spoiler: Updated Pictures

Spoiler: Update 1.1

Just tell me how you think it looks, be brutally honest. I'm taking advice
EDIT: Currently doing shit to make it a bit better. Adding a new poll in an hour for an actual rating system lmao
NOTE: I don't think many people realize this, this isn't for Wynncraft. This is a build that I'm making purely for my own enjoyment. Though it will have Wynn mechanics simply because they're easy to grasp.

 

I think it needs to be a bit bigger, since it's a dungeon. The walls need some texture, though. Everything else, I'd say is fine.

 

Right, I meant the hub. The hub needs to be bigger.

 

It's supposed to look something like the Qira Hive, except more dungeon-like when I build the rooms for Air/Thunder/Earth/Fire/Water

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Im starting to get this!

 

WHY DO DIFFERENT SHITS HAVE DIFFERENT VOTES ;-;

 

Thank you so much for this however we need to team on this because i have more ideas for this

 

Huh, no this is just a build. This isn't actually me adding onto your suggestion. I'm just doing this for fun

 

Change the beacons colors

 

What? The middle one is supposed to be air, which makes it white?
EDIT: I could make them all have beacons though.

 

That's what I meant ^-^

 

It's definitely not a bad start, but since it is a dungeon, maybe try to add a bit of rough, cavern feeling to it, to give it a more, creepier, or darker atmosphere, it greatly affects the player in gameplay. Ultimately, the concept is great, but the dome is a litte too symmetrical, I would suggest using more stairs and slabs to add more detail, so you can greatly increase the definition of the shapes, for example, the glass you put inside. Detailing is always important in structure. :)

 

of course since you are a "master builder" you MUST comment on every single build in the "your work" section

 

Sorry, i'm just bored, have nothing better to do.

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Besides, that's a very ignorant comment. What makes you think I HAVE to comment? Nothing is predictable. I just have nothing better to do.

 

Just saying.

But wouldn't that look a bit funky with all the holes in the ceiling >_>

 

I'm sorry for causing all this commotion on this thread, but I just feel the need to help you further improve your skills so that 1 day idek xD But sorry overall.

 

Did you not see that that I was rooting for you giving me advice?

 

just saying you are a great builder and it would help lots of people if you were to comment on their threads. i was just excited that a professional can help

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@SK see what I'm talking about? people want your advice

 

Then it was my mistake for taking it in a negative way. Sorry.

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Yes I did, but still, it was a bit of a mess arguing up there. Thank you though, you will be a great builder some day with that attitude, unlike myself

 

Hey I mean that jumble of grey looked pretty tasty.