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Build ~i Was A Litle Less Bored~ 2

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by pelopo3546, Sep 22, 2015.

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Do you like it?

  1. Yes <-- Maybe you still got some feedback?

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  2. It needs improvement <-- please tell me what needs to be improved.

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  3. No <-- pls tell me why.

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  1. pelopo3546

    pelopo3546 Nope im to dope for soap. VIP+

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    Same project different part of the map. Im now having the problem that i dont know what to improve anymore so once again please leave some feedback for me. And ideas are always welcome.
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  2. Corroded

    Corroded Meme Expert VIP+

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    Love the fantasy styled waterfall, but I'm more interested in that thing in the first picture in the background that looks like a water dam. You could try improving the terrain by adding some small caves in the side of the hill, like small holes.
     
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  3. pelopo3546

    pelopo3546 Nope im to dope for soap. VIP+

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    Thanks for the idea. And yes that is indeed a water dam its now like 35% finished.
     
  4. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    I think that one big flaw in this build is you don't have a download.
     
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  5. flip

    flip Chef HERO

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    I wish to see something like this in Gavel
     
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  6. dead zeffe

    dead zeffe Guest

    What's this beautiful wall at the right of the picture?
     
  7. pelopo3546

    pelopo3546 Nope im to dope for soap. VIP+

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    Its a big water dam im working on its like 35% finished.
     
  8. dead zeffe

    dead zeffe Guest

    Nice man ! I will see when it's finish :D
     
  9. Archmage

    Archmage look left. you failed. VIP+

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    the rock outcrop looks a bit out of place, imo
     
  10. Grantdrew

    Grantdrew Block Spammer

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    Love the tree and spikes but I'm not a huge fan of flowers at all :P in general it's great!
     
  11. Stewartsaurus

    Stewartsaurus Leader of the Infinity Franchise VIP+

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    Very good! I hope to see this in a future update (Fruma maybe?)
     
  12. Zoingo

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    Only thing I can think that could improve this is maybe adding a small river running into the lake. Maybe have it running from the dam? (Assuming they are apart of the same build). Otherwise, this looks amazing! If on a map, I would definitly explore that place!
     
  13. PearlescentMoon

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    (This post was made in September last year, isn't this a little old to be commenting on?) .-.
     
  14. pelopo3546

    pelopo3546 Nope im to dope for soap. VIP+

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    Never to late to give some good feedback. (although i forgot about this post)
     
  15. PearlescentMoon

    PearlescentMoon Proud Block Placer Slave VIP

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    Figured you may have finished it since then. :P If you haven't then sure. xD
     
  16. Grantdrew

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    Flowers usually grow in bunches, maybe try removing all the flowers first then add a few patches
     
  17. Linnyflower

    Linnyflower ironman btw Item Team HICH Master CHAMPION

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    Also add in a few more random stone spikes jutting off randomly :P
     
  18. JewelXSparkle

    JewelXSparkle The Bacon person who likes to build :D

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    this is my own personal preference, but the trees look weirdly un-natural. the leaves on the top look to thick and heavy, i feel like they would look more real if you added the leaves on more strategically, make them look more airy, if you think the leaves are good, maybe you should just make the very bottom of the trunk thicker. *out of place* i think the stone holding up the water fall still looks a bit impossible
     
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