Music Small Piano Song

yeah so suggest a title or whatever and tell me what you think

 

I like it! I don't have too much knowledge when it comes to music and the language regarding it, but I know the basics. You probably aren't looking for much criticism, but I would suggest doing something a little different from the 15th measure going into the 16th (I think that's right, but I saw it was in six eight time and I'm not sure). I can't exactly tell you what, but it just doesn't flow as nicely as the rest of the song does. Other than that it's really great, and I'll try my hand at playing it later tonight off the provided video :)

 

It's not bad, but I just feel like it's missing something, maybe if you extended the song a little bit and added in another measure it might flow a little better. It does a good job of what you wanted but I just feel like there could be more. But if you like it that's all that matters!

 

It might just be me, but I think the phrasing is a little off at some parts. That's why it kind of sounds like a measure or something should be added somewhere. Other than that though, this is pretty good!

 

Don't mind me.
Just putting this on loop as I play Minecraft.

 

I recommend turning your mic off while recording :3

 

The early parts of the melody remind me a lot of castle...

 

Did you record on a laptop? They have built in mics.
Easy fix, just turn off the mic input on the recording software.