Build Something

Thank you all for your Constructive criticism
I've done some changes
- Included more mountains with a house with varied shape on top
-Another tree?
-Windmill
(I'll add more terrain on the bottom later. I'm learning //copy and //paste -a) [And I wanna play WC now]

Spoiler: V 1

Okay so now

Spoiler: V 2

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http://prntscr.com/bg3uxb <<< Works when I don't use imgur .-.

 

The build could use more depth and detail. Also the shape of the house too simple, Make the shape more wild and random.

 

Thanks!

I'm going to build a third house behind the spruce wood one with a more wild shape :)
[Tomorrow morning, though. I'm gonna play some Wynncraft now]

 

Try more variance in block types for the floor, so it's not too harsh on the eye with a big bulk of cobblestone.
As for the terrain, try and give it more gradient from the mountains to the 'flat' ground, adding more depth/height to the adjacent ground. This will stop the mountains looking like they were cut out and pasted onto flat terrain. (Hope that makes sense)
I agree with ashdalf also, the house could do with a bit more variance in shape so it's not appearing too simple.
If you can, I'd try lowering or raising the house on its own little hill, maybe adding a bit more garden/decor on the land to bring it all together to a theme. :)

Good start though!

 

Curve the roads, don't make them edge IMO. And then add grass and small vegetations.

 

Check out Grian's gardening video to spice up that garden. Basically add varying height to it (and maybe add statues and features?)

Also, consider building a monument or something unique that makes your build stand out among the others.

 

Thanks!

Thanks for the tips!

Honestly I started out 3 days ago with no building experiences. Grian's vids actually helped me to build these kinds of houses :D
[and I copied the palette from one of his vids too]

 

Press F1 or FN+F1 so you don't have to blot out the IPs.

 

thanks!
Ok so I've heeded everyone [i think]'s advice, and I've edited the houses etc.
Please comment!

 

Bump! V2.0 is out :D

 

The roofs are nice, all of it could use some detail, I also don't feel like your screenshots show a lot of the build, and
Always use smooth lighting in screenshots! (Shaders is optional but it's harder to give feedback with shaders in the way.)
73/100

 

Hehe thanks.
I have no idea how to get / use shaders, could you PM me? Thanks :D

 

There wasnt an "awesome" vote so i had to put its okay <3, i love the detail in the tree and outside the house, the 2nd floor needs work though. Other than that its amazing!

 

Try and mix up the ground, maybe break the ground and fill the holes in with blocks with similar color. ex: Green clay, light green clay, green wool, some green carpet with flowstone underneath.

and the fence design, maybe vary the height of the logs at minimal, and making it straight makes it look, plasticky... and improve the small garden at the front of the nearest house, and ill leave it at that so i don't sound too bossy,,, (tho I do already XDXD)]

and I agree with other comments, 99/100 of the comments on here, so take there advice ;)

 

Thanks! :D