Art New Style

So recently, I've been trying to get past my art block and improve my style.
In this style, which I actually like I improved nose shading, lip shading, and well- general shading. Tell me what you guys think.

Also, I am willing to draw a profile pic like this for someone for FREE

The only thing you need to do to be put into the raffle, is to follow me and like this post :3

 

This looks Great!

 

It's just him

Would be annoying if I didn't say anything else than that, so, here goes something:

Frankly, nothing is bad, yet nothing is outstanding either. The few things I would do: Make your work smaller, or your canvas bigger; give that man a thicker neck; thin out the line-art; take it to the next level, 90s manga is really antiquated by now.

 

This is a really big close-up, if you saw the full image then you would know it is okay.

 

This is awesome!
Imo the mouth could be moved up a tiny bit but that's just me

 

Will do, im having trouble with the mouth

 

Then put that here instead of this. Why do you sabotage yourself?

 

Cause I didn't draw anything else- he is a floating head

 

DO THINGS FOR YOUR SELF, NOT FOR THE LIKES, MAMA.

If you were doing things for yourself, that you'd know this is your stage, this is your time to shine, and you would procure to show your best out here. TAKE TIPS, MAMA.

 

??????!!!!!!!!????!! I am seriously confused

 

How about let's not start drama on someone's thread about art. Constructive criticism is okay, but don't try to be all negative towards Kim... Just my opinion...

 

In simple words, I told you to shine as bright as diamond when it comes to uploading your work.

If you can avoid doubts like mine or Ryuu, then procure that, always show what you're made of, if you can justify yourself that fast.

But if you still don't get it, then nevermind.

 

Oh? Well thanks I guess

 

Oh man this is a huge improvement on your last style! Could I get a profile pic?

 

Follow me :3 I think like only 2 people are in the raffle cause of this