Build I Created A Cut Scene For Bob's Reincarnation!

So I am that guy who did the vanilla quest system and that zombie cut scene (the cut scene as a test one) and I was thinking about what quest(s) need a cut scene. I decided on a cut scene instead of a tunnel for Bob's Reincarnation. Hope you like it and here it is:

Btw: Cut scene starts at 1:20

 

It is nicely done, but you could've worked on a more detailed walking animation, instead of them just "gliding" :D

 

Awesome! Kutgw

 

I like the way you say "Grian" as "Grine"


Oh, right, the cutscene. Cool cutscene, the walk cycle could be polished a bit though.

 

Thanks for the criticism, I'll work on the walking animation.

 

I really love it. However, for "transferring power to animals", why not add a little ball of particles move from Bob and into the animals? (you could even show them "infused" with power) That way it'd be more obvious what he's doing and it looks cooler. :)
Also, obviously the walking animation isn't quite polished but that shouldn't be a top priority. It's EXTREMELY difficult to do walking animations naturally. If you really want to, try just copying another player's walking animations (in MC) and try to speed up the command block processes if you can too. It'll make it look a lot smoother.

Also, apply for wynncraft command block team!

 

Although I really like your work and I think this is a much needed upgrade to Bob's Reincarnation, I think instead of named "adventurers" attacking Bob, it should just be a generic, non-specific warriors attacking him, wearing wynnic armor and using the resource pack weapons. Jumla, Salted and Grian all deserve our utmost respect and praise, however using them in the storyline doesn't really fit. I know you might not want to use the resource pack, so the swords and armor seem good for now.

I dont think there should be such a long pause while Jumla (generic wynn warrior) walks up to him and Bob kills Jumla. It seems a tad bit awkward and odd.

Also, you might want to add some blood particles when he strikes them down with his sword.

This is clearly a lot of work, and it is amazing what you've done!
Maybe take these suggestions into consideration; although they might not be possible.

 

It looks good, the general idea is good but it's not really smooth, especially the moving animation. I have just passed the command blocker trial and I think I mostly passed it because my cinematics were quite fluent, the movement animations were smooth. I think you need to work at that. The same for the sword animation that Bob uses to kill Jumla, Salted and Grian. It could be a little bit more exciting and perhaps Jumla, Salted and Grian could instead of disappearing drop to the ground or shatter apart. Other than that, it's really nice.

 

The blood would be possible andi could just change the armor stand's names and heads to the "adventurers".

 

With this supposedly being an epic fight of huge proportions, one thing I would suggest is more explosive particles, and applying things to the player, like play sound and short bursts of slowness to simulate power pushing outwards, the fighting scene, in my personal opinion, would look better if you had a team of warrior, Mage, archer, and assassin all charge Bob, just to be decimated, instead of one at a time.

(But that's just my two cents, feel free to take it or leave it :D)

 

Looks good but speeding up the command blocks would really help make it look smoother

 

Back to the good ol' days of crafted movie.

May all those "salted is a bitch" signs be put to rest


But this cutscene is un-believable. Have you sent an app to make cutscenes on wynn yet?