Art Escape

This is a escape. I think this is a very cool scene (not saying that its painted very well) but if I was there irl i would like start building a house.

Spoiler: PROGRESS OVER 2 MONTHS

Spoiler: Late November (when I started)

Spoiler: Now

 

You've improved a lot, no doubt. Your palette, perspective, and composition are much better. One thing that will help you improve even more is understanding lighting. There's nothing in this painting that portrays an example of bad lighting, Although it doesn't seem that you've made much of an effort to apply how lighting would effect everything other than just the mountains/rocks in the distance. The most basic way of achieving this is asking yourself "Where is the light coming from?" Then, using logic to apply it to all of the objects/terrain in the picture. Hoped this helped a little bit at least. Keep it up!

 

Definitely helped dude, thanks for the critique and advice! I really do need to pay attention to lighting and start learning about that. Thanks.