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Build Small Rustic House [please Criticize]

Discussion in 'Your Work' started by Choo, Dec 4, 2015.

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  1. I think this is a VERY good house!

  2. I think this is a good house!

  3. I think this is a Ok house, could use some improvements!

  4. I think this is abysmal house, it needs lots of improvements!

  5. I think this is the worst house ever!

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  1. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Hey!
    The last big rustic house I created, surprisingly, did not get good reviews ):
    I had decided to "up" my game and create a smaller, but better looking rustic house!
    Here are all the pictures:
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    Final note: I do not qualify as a good rustic roof builder.
    I hope you enjoy it (waiting for flubscore)

    During an edit, I added 3 new screenshots, but uploads aren't available when you edit your post, so I added some imgur images.
    http://imgur.com/ayiVOno
    http://imgur.com/g2Y1Ni3
    http://imgur.com/HD2DsKx
     
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    Choo, Dec 4, 2015
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  2. The One-eyed Guy

    The One-eyed Guy that guy VIP+

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    9/10 There's just something a bit odd about that open balcony.
     
    The One-eyed Guy, Dec 4, 2015
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  3. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Yea, I tried adding some glass to it, but it only maked it worse, I just left it as it is. I still think it looks good!
     
    Choo, Dec 4, 2015
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  4. (Meric)

    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    Nice! I know it was called a small Rustic house buy some more exterior would be nice. Like some fences or a garden. Watch Grians vid on transforming a house to see what I mean
     
    (Meric), Dec 4, 2015
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  5. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    OMG I completely forgot about a garden! I will have to re-do a bit :PP!
     
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    Damn right you will. No Garden, No Score.
     
    Flubby, Dec 4, 2015
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  7. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Nooo!!!!!
    I will be back...
    with a garden!
     
    Choo, Dec 4, 2015
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    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    Nice! With that garden it looks good! 9.8/10 You did really well on the interior and exterior on detail on such a small and cute build! No criticism. (I never give 10/10 just incase something super amazing comes)
     
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  9. Troll4ever31

    Troll4ever31 Designed to be a moron.

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    I can't bloody see it, the imgur pictures don't show much, and the other ones are too bloody small.
     
    Troll4ever31, Dec 5, 2015
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  10. Tundra

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    You could make the roof better with stairs around the logs.
     
    Tundra, Dec 5, 2015
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  11. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Around the logs...
    Ill take that note..
     
    Choo, Dec 5, 2015
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    (Meric) No longer edgy

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    Uh Troll4ever you just click on the image and it will enlarge
     
    (Meric), Dec 5, 2015
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  13. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Later Im going to update the pictures, if I adjust the build.
    Still waiting for flubscore and a half page wall of criticism though.
    Maybe if I pray to the flubby gods I will *achflubsenpie* get my wish.
     
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  14. Smartin

    Smartin Travelled Adventurer

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    I rather use spruce than oak wood. Its small, and makes the thing weird. Even though I like it with it was not fot its size and the oak wood.
     
    Smartin, Dec 6, 2015
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    43/100 FlubScore™ "Roof still not rustic"

    Make the roof sharp. Not flat. Flat is not rustic. Flat is shit. Shit sucks. Nobody sucks. Don't be that guy. Also, garden needs work. House needs shape. Don't be that guy.
     
    Flubby, Dec 6, 2015
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  16. Choo

    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Ok thanks, I kinda rushed the garden though.
     
    Choo, Dec 7, 2015
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  17. Kogut

    Kogut Well-Known Adventurer

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    you can still add images once you make a post. but it looks pretty good
     
    Kogut, Dec 7, 2015
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    Choo Well-Known Adventurer

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    Thanks, Ill try to do thumbNails in edits from now on.
     
    Choo, Dec 7, 2015
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    there are image tags for a reason :P
     
    Kogut, Dec 7, 2015
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  20. green254

    green254 Mediocre architect

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    it might just be me but the oak log Asa roof border just looks weird. also the lines of stone on the roof are also a bit out of place in my opinion.
     
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