Build My Final Apply For Build Team

hope u engoy

 

AAAHHH MY EYES

 

8/8 for effort

 

i built this by hand no tools

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took like 3hours

 

10/10 it really...

 

thxs last time was litrly alot of bad comments

 

well its not bad... I supose.

 

thxs finplays

 

I can't tell if this is a joke...

 

what do u mean

 

Go watch some building tutorials... come back in a year or so.

 

These are joke theads right?
But in all honestly,you should really try to watch some building tutorials and tips by Grian if you want to meet wynncraft build team standards.I mean...your build is not bad but it's too just too simple..

 

That is not good tbh

 

I'm gonna be honest here.
This looks like something I would make 4 years ago when I joined minecraft.
Now, the Wynn build team has VERY high expectations.
I applied for the build team with builds similar to this:

Now, I know it isn't that good, and I could probably do better, its still pretty good, at least in my opinion. (Too much wood, eh?)
Now, the Wynn build team is the elite of the elite. They could build something 20x better than this in an hour or two.
Your build, first off, doesn't look too medieval. And the only place in Wynn with a lot of nether stuff is, well, the nether portal.
Second off, it looks like you build this in maybe 5 minutes. Put some effort into it! If gavel had been detailed as little as these build, sure, gavel would have been out last year, but It would have been crap!
I'll leave you with some building tutorials, to try and help you on your journey to become a Wynn builder.




Good luck! Happy building!

 

All right, it looks better... But the nether trees are a bit... huh?

 

Builders Note - I will not list out the commands used. Watch Grian's* videos for that.

So... I'm not gonna bring in FlubScore™ Into play here because I would come off as an [REDACTED].

So this build is pretty one dimensional. It's just a house with tiny trees and basic plants. Now I know you don't have access to World Edit and VoxelSniper, but there are plenty of single player modpacks I used to build in before I found some reliable servers.

I recommend using VoxelBox from the FTB launcher for a good Voxel and WE pack. If you don't have access to that, apply for the EnderVines build server, where someon will be happy to mentor you.

Onto the build.

So the house is very small. It is very clear that @WonderousDanFox (<3 you too) inspired this build with the Split World's built, but that could have been done without world edit or Voxel.

The build also utterly lacks terra. I am going to assume you are an amatere builder so... Builder lingo time...

Voxel - VoxelSniper, a PlugIn for servers that is very useful for building terrain.
"What did you make those mountains with?"
"Voxel"
World Edit - WE, A useful pack for general building commands.
"I used WE to copy paste my houses."
Terra - Terrain. The general land of the build. Hills, valleys and mountains.
"I made my terra primarily from Voxel, with some handmade things mixed in."
Organics - Any natural structure that isn't the land. Stairs and trees are typically organics.
"After Cubie does the Terra, I'm going to add the Organics."
Structures - Typically buildings. Can include boats and others things of that nature.
"I specialize in making fantasy style structures."

Now to explain what goes into a good build that I make.

First off, we get a nice image. Let's say we want to make a fortress on top of a hill, with a hamlet (small village) surrounding it, then we would start by making the outline with Voxel or World Edit. This is going to be a sizable build.

Then we start by raising the mountains and hills. Once you are content it's the heights, I add rivers and trees. Then we add the fortress and structures.

After that, bask in the glory of your build that took 7 hours of work.

*Wynncraft's Head Builder

 

*my reaction when i see this thread*

 

This is a good start for building, though not near the wynn build team standards. Here are some ways to improve your builds:
1. First, the trees. In Wynn, there are always custom trees. Every last tree was handmade... well, at least the first of each tree. Then they copied the trees. Now, to apply for the build team you probably wouldn't need a lot of trees. Just 2-6 different models of trees. You wouldn't need too many, as you don't have access to voxel or we. Of course, as said in comments above, you could find/apply for a server with these things. Try to add roots to the trees and make them more than one block thick... well, maybe with the exception of things similar to Wynn's Acacia and Pine trees!
2. The tent is very basic. A good way to make the tent better would be to use more than one colour of wool. It also needs more things inside it, like a chest or maybe cobwebs if you want the tent to be sort of abandoned. You could also try making the bed out of wool.
3. In Wynn, boundaries between places aren't a line. Instead, things slowly change from lets say, Nesaak Forest to the Elkurn area. Add a few blocks of netherrack and a few grass blocks to each side to make the boundary look more realistic. Try a similar thing with the house as well, maybe making one side decayed.
4. Make the house less flat. Good houses always have pillars or other things sticking out. Try different blocks and other items until you find something you think fits. Also, add a wider variety of blocks inside. Be creative! And also, logs on the roof or floor don't usually work.
5. I actually really like the corrupted area! This reminds me of a build I'm currently working on, though I don't have much time for it. However, the corrupted trees don't work. If you want something similar to them which stands out, then maybe some ruins or obsidian spikes?
6. If you do these things, you will have a great build. However, Wynncraft wants a bigger variety! Try making mountains, towers and maybe a river. Maybe a cave too? Yes, mountains may be hard without we or voxel. Unless you make them hollow! As long as you don't do this when you actually become a builder (and mountains aren't that hard with voxel) then you will be fine. With the tower, try similar styles to the things I suggested for the house. And in the cave... well, add a variety of blocks to the cave itself and add a few ores maybe? Or maybe make it ruined or deserted with some sort of structure? Try using clay to make a variety of blocks!

 

You've got to be kidding...

I recommend not to not only check out Grian's YouTube channel, but also to look at the builds on the Wynncraft server. It definetly has some great builds. The ip is play.wynncraft.com, so if you haven't started playing on it yet, I highly recommend that you do!

 

Well, I guess harsh criticism is the only way to go about this.
Your building lacks crucial elements: Three dimensions, good color combinations, and the rustic feel. Wynncraft is a very ancient, rustic-themed RPG as you should have known. I don't blame these people for giving you the IP as if you never played before, because with a build theme like this it sure seems like you haven't.

It honestly seems like you just started playing Minecraft. It's my opinion that the best way for you to learn to build well is to just play Minecraft for a while. It takes not only creativity but also a great deal of experience & trial and error to become a good builder. If you want to watch tutorials, consider watching Grian's tutorials. I also recommend watching the people who play on the Hermitcraft server, because they build amazing things and some explain what they're thinking as they build. Maybe they can give you insight.

Anyways, don't be disappointed about all this harsh criticism - you seem like you have just started playing Minecraft (although this is my rough observation). Just keep building and think about what could possibly make your buildings look better. Also, Wynncraft has very high standards for building skill. It takes a very long time to become a good enough builder for Wynncraft.

~Dark Samus